When the Heart Cries
by: Cindy Woodsmall
As Hannah opened the cattle gate, Paul appeared in the double-wide
doorway to the barn . His head was hatless, a condition frowned upon by
her bishop, revealing hair the color of ripe hay glistening under the sun.
His blue eyes showed up in Hannah's dreams regularly.
As I get out of the car, I see the waves hitting the already hard packed
sand. The waves this morning were fierce, usually a beautiful sight, showing
the blue and green color of the rocks. The green one doesn't regularly see.
Mmmm, I love watching the ocean. Your last sentence is a fragment -- okay if you intended that, but make sure it is intentional. See you soon.
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